Conventions & Usage — Practice · Grade 11 English
Chapter: Language, Style & ConventionsWhat this practice covers
By the end of Conventions & Usage you should be able to:
- I can use advanced punctuation — restrictive versus nonrestrictive commas, colons, and em dashes — to make my meaning exact.
- I can apply the fine conventions of mechanics, including hyphenating compound modifiers and using apostrophes correctly, to write with polish and control.
11 questions, multiple choice and written answer, each with a worked explanation.
Vocabulary used: convention, restrictive vs. nonrestrictive clause, em dash, compound modifier.
Problem 1
- The trophy lost it's shine.
- The team lost it's best player to injury.
- The team lost its best player to injury.
- Its going to be a long season.
Answer and explanation
The team lost its best player to injury.
The possessive 'its' takes no apostrophe (like 'his' and 'hers'), and 'it's' means only 'it is' or 'it has.' 'The team lost its best player' correctly uses the possessive. The other options either use 'it's' where the possessive is needed, or 'Its' where 'It's' (it is) is needed.
Problem 2
Answer and explanation
In (a) the clause is restrictive (no commas): it limits the statement to only those employees who received training, implying that some did not, and that only the trained ones passed. In (b) the clause is nonrestrictive (set off by commas): it says all the employees passed, and adds as extra information that they had all received training. The commas turn 'only some' into 'all.'
Problem 3
- The verdict, which no one had predicted — silenced the courtroom.
- The verdict—which no one had predicted, silenced the courtroom.
- The verdict—shocked everyone in the courtroom.
- The verdict — which no one had predicted — silenced the courtroom.
Answer and explanation
The verdict — which no one had predicted — silenced the courtroom.
A matched pair of em dashes sets off the nonrestrictive insertion 'which no one had predicted' with emphasis, leaving 'silenced the courtroom' as the main clause. The other options either put a single dash between the subject and its verb or mix a comma and a dash, breaking the required pair.
Problem 4
Answer and explanation
Answers vary; for example: 'The committee delayed the vote for one reason: the budget still did not balance.' A colon works because a complete independent clause precedes it and what follows explains that clause. (The original was a comma splice; a period or semicolon would also fix it, but the colon best signals that an explanation follows.)
Problem 5
- The counselor who runs the college office wrote the recommendation.
- The counselor who runs the college office, wrote the recommendation.
- The counselor, who runs the college office wrote the recommendation.
- The counselor, who runs the college office, wrote the recommendation.
Answer and explanation
The counselor who runs the college office wrote the recommendation.
Because the school has several counselors, the clause 'who runs the college office' is restrictive — it identifies WHICH counselor — so it takes no commas. The paired-comma version would wrongly imply there is only one counselor, and the single stray commas are simply incorrect.
Problem 6
Answer and explanation
“Mira said she would review the form” names Mira’s intention. “Mira asked the director to review the form” assigns the review differently. Choose the intended meaning before editing.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 7
Answer and explanation
Software may miss an ambiguous pronoun or inaccurate relationship. Read for intended meaning, then check the relevant convention.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 8
Answer and explanation
Edit after revising ideas and organization. Check sentence boundaries, agreement, pronoun references, punctuation, capitalization, and quotation accuracy. The method transfers, but the particular detail, scope, and context must be read again. “Mira said she would review the form” names Mira’s intention. “Mira asked the director to review the form” assigns the review differently. Choose the intended meaning before editing.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 9
Answer and explanation
“Each of the speakers has approved their excerpt. The forms were saved.” “Each” is singular; “forms” is plural. Singular they can refer to an unspecified person; do not replace it mechanically. A complete response supplies context, a focused claim, a brief supporting detail, explanation, and a relevant qualification. Do not simply repeat this model.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 10
Answer and explanation
Check whether the response explains edit after revising ideas and organization. check sentence boundaries, agreement, pronoun references, punctuation, capitalization, and quotation accuracy. Ask for a relevant detail and the reason it supports the conclusion. Prioritize the mistaken assumption shown here: “Grammar checking software has approved it, so the meaning is clear.”
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.
Problem 11
Answer and explanation
Lena discovers that naming a worker without naming her choices can still reduce her to a decorative role. The program, archive records, and evidence panel connect public identity with institutional power. The visitors who do not read the panel complicate any claim that the omission has been completely repaired. The response must supply its own precise detail and explain it; copying the model without fresh evidence is insufficient.
Use the criteria to compare your reasoning, not to copy the model’s wording. A supported alternative interpretation may earn full credit.
Response criteria
- Make an accurate, focused claim or revision.
- Use a relevant detail or a clearly explained language choice.
- Explain the relationship and recognize a relevant limit.